An attempt at something new, something different from my usual style. Please comment as you may see fit.
He let out a slight sigh as he moved to turn the alarm off.
A smile crossed him, reminding him of all the alarms he ignored, and here he
was intercepting one before it even begin its monotonous irritating chime. He
had a long night. He could exactly recall all the hours, the time and his
positions on the bed and the single thread of thought which subsumed his entire
night. Entire night was such a small time period to put it in. He took a look
across the bed and as usual she was already up, but he already knew that. The
sounds emanating from the kitchen already announced that and moreover he was
only pretending to be awake when she got up around an hour ago and covered him
with his sheet. He never told her but he was really mystified by her graceful demeanor
and that too despite his tantrums, a much too obvious feeling of indifference
and her modern upbringing. In another universe, in another life he would have
considered himself lucky to have her. He lingered on, trying to catch the last
shreds of his night long wrestle, but finally decided to delay it for later. Out
of habit he got up and ambled towards the door to pick up the newspaper. She
sensed his movements and as a well synchronized part of her morning rituals,
put a cup of tea on the dining table to accompany his newspaper. He pulled on a
nervous smile as she crossed her path, still engrossed in his thoughts while
mindlessly staring at the newspaper, she responded as she normally would.
“Good Morning”, she said with a believable cheerfulness in
her voice. The reply was equally formal and lackluster, but that never seemed
to deter her. Again she got busy with her morning rituals. They both were too
dispassionate and boring to be identified as a newly married couple. He kept
going through the pages although he could make sense of some news at least. For
the time being his dilemma was ignored and replaced by the frail political
scenario in one of the states. He kept glancing at her in between, carefully
timing them to avoid any eye contact, as today was one of those days when he
couldn’t risk being exposed. He had no idea that he was not that good as acting
as he thought he was.
The rest of the morning was mechanical. He has gone about
his usual routine. Everything was already selected, arranged, all the decisions
have been taken. He couldn’t believe the chaos the mornings used to be earlier,
when he was just a single person trying to fight the Monday morning blues. Her
choice was always in good taste and it was uncanny that how often he knew he
would have ended up selecting the same things as she had. His admiration in her
was renewed. He was getting too dependent on her and he wanted to avoid that. He
dreaded the ticking clock he wanted to delay the inevitable but couldn’t.
Breakfast was uneventful except for her. She looked lovely in her dress, which
he knew was one of her favorite. He tried to move his glance elsewhere to avoid
being caught staring at her and he failed. She looked too occupied with her
morning crossword to notice his stares, but he didn’t want to risk it. He finished
it in a hurry, which was ironical as he wanted the morning to drag as long as
possible, for he didn’t think he was ready to face what awaited him. As he was
about to leave she intercepted him.
“Aren’t we supposed to go together?”
He remembered she had told him about her meeting which was
supposed to be in the same area as his office. He regretted forgetting it and
shuddered at the effects it may entail.
“Oh sorry I forgot, you come I am waiting downstairs in the
car.”, he said trying to sound apologetic and sincere. And he left. He decided against using the
elevator and trickled slowly along the stairs. From the 11th floor it
was going to be a long walk, it was going to be a long day and he didn’t knew
how he wanted it to end.
To be continued.....
5 comments:
I dnt care about ur busy schedule in the next few days...come up with the next chapter asap... ;)
Brilliant, for a first timer! Waiting for the next part!
nice work....post the link of next part...as soon as possible
Nice one....The first part looks good. Waiting for next part. :)
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